Monday, September 6, 2010

my first original short story.

a lot of hard work has gone into writing this deep literary piece. please be kind. it was originally meant to be 55 fiction, i.e. a story comprising only 55 words, but my creativity got the best of me and i wrote double of that.


The ray of light streaming through her bedroom window and onto her face had gotten bright enough to wake her up. Such phenomenon usually makes people curse Helios, but she found it beautiful (cuz she was an annoying bitch like that). In any case it was better than listening to her psycho of a mom scream into her ears about getting late. She woke up and stretched contently, her thoughts full of optimism about the promising day ahead.

Suddenly, she got a text. It was the Head Cheerleader of their school. “i slept wid ur bf last nyt. xo”

Well, the Sun doesn’t seem so beautiful now, does it, Bitch?

The End.

Moral : i cannot write stories to save my life. Also, keep your bf interested. Get a boob job done.


  1. Haha...I don’t know if I am supposed to laugh...
    But you give it a funny-sad twist Menkah!
    You probably can write stories to save your life...or better still, smile n see how many lives u save;-)

  2. ur totally right menkah,,,,,,u cannot write stories to save your offence!!!!

    keep ur bf interested?? hehe liked dat part!!!

  3. i really dont remember the first thing i said when you showed it to me..BUT...this is SOME writing,girl!
    your talent makes me so insecure about my 'future plans'...hahahaa!

  4. suruchi- wow. to think i was what the docs needed 2 save lives all along :P thanks, u r too sweet !

    dandelion- none taken ...i cant have ALL the talents now, can i ? :P

    mr happy- thanks :)

    rosh- thats ok sweetie we cant all be number 1 can we??! i promise to step back if it proves to be a hindrance in ur career. yes thats how nice i am.

    xyzandme- are u asking or telling?!

  5. hahaha ;P

    if a girl needs a boob job to keep the bf interested then she needs to move on,She has the wrong bf.I am just saying.

    Take care

  6. Hey babe, I saw your dp on facebook and you look oomph!
    if you're the one in pink i'm ready to jump off a building for you~
    Please accept my proposal to marry?
    I would do anything for my pretty angel.